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| Unintentional Virgin ★★★★ |
Karma Points (what were her parents thinking?) is around the corner from her 20th birthday and she’s still a virgin. It’s not from lack of trying but the universe must be out to get her. Every time she gets close something goes wrong. One time the boy’s parents walked in on them, another boy stud her up, she just can’t seem to lose it! Her friend Eva has a plan, go to the club and hook up for a one night stand.
Once at the club Karma isn’t interested in much, one guy is drowning his sorrows and isn’t interested in meeting anyone. The bouncer caught her eye the moment she spotted him, he was “dark and delicious” he was “covered in tattoos (with) inky black hair … strong jawline and the palest blue eye’s” she’d ever seen. But there’s no way he would ever look twice at someone like her. She had a few extra pounds, mousy, frizzy hair, her eyes were too far apart and she had no self-esteem.
Jax has been helping out his brother-in-law at the club bouncing whenever he could. It was good money, easy work and a good way to spend his time, what else did he have to do since the disaster of his last relationship ended. His social life had been slow since then. Standing at the club door checking ID’s one night, Jax looks up and sees a girl with just the right amount of curves and the most amazing eye’s he’s ever seen.
Can Karma convince this hot hunk to be her first? Jax finds her intriguing especially later that night when she tells him she’s “came here to have her first one=night stand”! “Jesus that girl was going to give him a heart attack. She looked so sweet and innocent with those wide eyes and they she dropped (that) bomb”. Will this finally be her big night or will fate step in once again and stop her from having sex?
I enjoyed this story. It was mildly predictable but these two characters made me want to follow their story to the end. Jax is that guy women are always looking for, handsome, built and a really good guy. Karma is a young girl who has never been able to become what is expected of her, she doesn’t believe in happily ever after she just doesn’t want to die a virgin. It’s a nice story and I give it 4 stars.
*Donna*
